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Yes, I can. I\'ve been to jogging around the nature park and play the beach ball in the beach.
Also, I\'ve been to clime the mountain.
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Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Nature activities are leisure and recreation that take place outdoors. This includes activities in a rich natural environment such as a forest or beach and urban green spaces such as a park or backyard.
- Kristine ^^
Yes, I can.
>> Yes, I can name some activities that I can do in nature.
I\'ve been to jogging around the nature park and play the beach ball in the beach.
>> I can jog around the nature park and play with a ball on the beach.
Also, I\'ve been to clime the mountain.
>> I can also climb a mountain.
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