1.30 Homework

2015-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! Finally, we have a great weekend. Do you have any exciting plans? I hope that you will have a nice weekend with your boyfriend. Do you ever hate yourself? Hul! I never hate myself at all. I think that I am a great person. I respect myself as well. But I have a handicap that is a hesitation before deciding something. I hate myself like that charactor of mine. Anyway, I think that I tend to be respected generally by person who know me. Thank you! Have a wonderful weekend!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I also hope that you will have a fun and wonderful weekend with your family and friends. See you next week!^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! Finally, we have a great weekend. >> Correct. Do you have any exciting plans? >> Correct. I hope that you will have a nice weekend with your boyfriend. >> Correct.Do you ever hate yourself?Hul! I never hate myself at all. >> Correct. I think that I am a great person. >> Correct. I respect myself as well. >> Correct. But I have a handicap that is a hesitation before deciding something. >> But my weak point is that I always hesitate when deciding on something. I hate myself like that charactor of mine. >> I hate that characteristic of mine. Anyway, I think that I tend to be respected generally by person who know me.>> Anyway, I think that I tend to be respected by the people who know me.Thank you! Have a wonderful weekend! >> Correct.

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