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Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework and sharing your thoughts on this one. ^ ^  

Indeed, gender inequality is a global issue. Globally, women have fewer opportunities for economic participation than men, less access to basic and higher education, greater health and safety risks, and less political representation. We hope it could change in the future. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

This is one of the hot potatoes nowadays in Korea, maybe in the whole world.

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I surely agree with about \"feminist\".

>>I surely agree with feminists.
I am a woman, and I also have many unfair experiences as I grow up.

>>I am a woman, and I also had many unfair experiences growing up.
My younger sister received smaller money than man a few years ago, even she did same amount of work in company.

>>A few years ago, my younger sister received a lesser amount of money compared to her male colleagues even if they did the same amount of work in the company.
Now, the treatment to women become much better but still it is.

>>Now, the treatment of women became better but still there are some disparities.
Some men say they get reverse discrimination against men.

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I can agree with it for some part, but not all.

>>I can agree with it on some parts, but not all.
This is not a simple problem.

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We should steadily make a correct law and rule in a society.

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And, I am afraid to separate men and women between young people.

>>And I am afraid that young people will have the notion of disparity between a man and a woman. (I didn\'t quite get your sentence, but I hope this is what you mean ^ ^) 
There are an extreme misandry and misogyny voices in Korea.

>>There are extreme misandry and misogyny voices in Korea.  
I think this is not good way.

>>I think this is not how it should be.
We should understand about \"gender equality\", and change the society to correctly.

>>We should understand more about \"gender equality\", and change the society correctly.