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In my childhood, IMF (international monetary fund) helped Korea. 

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 I remember the period because I was in elementary school.

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 Before then, we have a sweet home and my father worked in a pharmaceutical company.

>>Before that time, we have a sweet home and my father worked in a pharmaceutical company.
 Many companies started to reduce employee and my father was one of the victims.

>> Many companies started to reduce their employees and my father was one of them.

After then, my father and mother opened a restaurant in a new place.

>>After that, my father and mother opened a restaurant in a new place.
 Therefore, our family moved to a new city.

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 Everything was new and strange for my family.

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 I think that maybe we all together struggled to live at that time.

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 I moved to a new school, and it was hard to make a new relationship because it was my first chance in school.

>> I moved to a new school and it was hard to make a new relationship because it was my first time to be in that school.
 Fortunately, we lived and grew up well.

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 IMF period was already finished and Korea\'s economy is quite stable now.

>> The period when IMF helped us was already finished and Korea\'s economy is quite stable now.
 But, sometimes I want to know how much different if it has not occurred IMF in Korea.

>> But, sometimes I want to know how different it would be if IMF never helped in Korea.
 We know that the national economy is very important and we should prepare for the expected worst change in advance.

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 However, it was a part of my childhood that I want to change.

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