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Hello Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today. I appreciate your effort in writing one despite your stomachache. I hope that you will feel better tomorrow. Have a good rest.
T. JanE ^^
My manager went a business trip to Taiwan.
>> My
manager went on a business trip to Taiwan.
She is only my team member, so I'm a little bored today.
>> She
is my only team member, so I'm a little bored today.
She is very busy person.
>> She is a very busy person.
She takes on duty of communications in Asia-Pacific area.
>> She takes on the duty of communications in the Asia-Pacific area.
She is only 31 years old but her position in company is very high, so she gets business trip to abroad very often- at least once a month.
>> She
is only 31 years old but her position in the company is very high. She gets to
go on business trips abroad at least once a month.
She has no interest in drinking, so we doesn't have dinner together until late
night - It is very nice:)
>> She
does not have any interest in drinking, so we don't have dinner together until
late at night, which is very nice.
When we have dinner together, we just enjoyed spaghetti and pizza with a cup of
lemonade.
>> Whenever we have dinner together, we just enjoy eating
spaghetti and pizza and drinking a cup of lemonade.
I like her.
>> CORRECT.
:)
Anyway, I don't feel better today because of catching an enteritis, I just want
to go home early... ;-(
>> Anyway, I don't feel better today because I have (I caught) enteritis. I just want to go home early.
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