1. 31 Homework

2018-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

** HOMEWORK: It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others. What is your opinion about this? I think so. People who travel outside of their own country see many forms of other life and culture. It will be absolutely different with seeing it through TV or books. Last year, I did multicultural mentouring and I met a girl whose mother and father are both Pakistani. Whenever I went to the girl's house to do mentouring, her mother gave me Pakistan food and the girl always talked about Pakistan culture. It makes me understand Pakistan well. I think if I go to Pakistan, I can understand about Pkistan more.

강사 첨삭

I think so. People who travel outside of their own country see many forms of other life and culture. It will be absolutely different with seeing it through TV or books. Last year, I did multicultural mentouring and I met a girl whose mother and father are both Pakistani. Whenever I went to the girl\'s house to do mentouring, her mother gave me Pakistan food and the girl always talked about Pakistan culture. It makes me understand Pakistan well. I think if I go to Pakistan, I can understand about Pkistan more.


I think I agree in the given statement above, people who travel in other countries can see many forms of lifestyles and cultures. The experience will be absolutely different than seeing it trough televisions, internet or books. I myself had an experience to mentor about multicultural last year. I met a girl whose parents are both Pakistani. Whenever I go to the girl\'s house for mentoring, her mother always give me their local delicacies and their daughter always talk about their culture. It makes me understand Pakistanis well. I think if I go to Pakistan, I can understand about them more.

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