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Hi [이름]! Happy Friday! Thank you for doing your homework and sharing your New Year thoughts.^ ^

You have a very profound and admirable tradition. I have to agree with you, you just can\'t help but to be envious of young kids now receiving all those pocket money! They must be very happy and exited indeed! ^ ^ I hope you enjoy your holiday though! Happy New Year! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

In Korea, we have a traditional culture that a young man bow head to elder people.

>>In Korea, it is tradition that young people must bow down their heads to older people. 
The elder people is usually to be parents, grandparents, and relatives.

>>The older people would be grandparents, parents and other relatives.
And then, the elder people give money to young men.

>>And after doing so, the older people would give money to the young ones.
So, Lunar New Year day is the day every young men is waiting.

>>So Lunar New Year is the day that every young person is waiting for.
However, maybe it is most dislike holiday to adults.

>>However, it\'s probably the holiday that most adults dislike.
In general, the age of young men is until university students.

>>In general, the age of young people is until when they are university students.
But, sometimes if we can not earn the money after graduation, we receive the money.

>>Correct or

>>But, sometimes if we are still not earning money after graduation, we still can receive money from our elders.
I remember that I had bought something I want to buy for a long time after New Year day.

>>I remember when I was only able to buy something I wanted for a long time after New Year.
Now, I became relatively a elder people.

>>Now, I am relatively an older person. 
So, I give pocket money to my parents or a niece.

>>So, I should give pocket money to my parents and to my nieces or nephews.
I envy young people in the day.

>>I\'m starting to envy young people these days because of this tradition.