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Hello [이름]!  Our health is very important. We should take care of ourselves especially when we have a history of disease in our family. I am glad to know that, as of today, everyone in your family is healthy..~~T.Dee

In my childhood, mumps became prevalent and my younger brother and sister and I contracted mumps.

>>In my childhood, mumps became prevalent.  My younger brother, my sister and I contracted mumps.
The disease moved to me from my younger brother because we used same towel.

>>The disease was also acquired by my younger brother because we used same towel.
Fortunately, I recovered quickly with medicine.

>>Fortunately, I recovered quickly with the help of medicine.
 But, my younger sister was hospitalized for a while and endured hardship.

>> CORECT!
 I remember one day in that period.

>> CORECT!

>>OR: I remember a day during that time.
 My younger sister slept around the clock that day.

>> CORECT!

>>OR: My younger sister slept all day on that day.
 And the doctor said that that day will be the hardest day for my younger sister.

>> CORECT!
 The state of my younger sister was immediately before pneumonia.

>> The condition of my younger sister was worse than having pneumonia.
 Fortunately, my younger sister won from the disease.

>> Fortunately, my younger sister recovered from the disease.
 However, she became deaf in one ear.

>> CORECT!
 Although she can hear from that ear, the listening ability is very low.

>> Although she can hear from that ear, her listening ability is very low.
 And almost she hears from another ear.

>>She hears better with her other ear.
 My parents were very sad, but we grew up well now.

>> CORECT!
 So, when I think \'disease\' in my childhood, I used to think about the mood of that day in the hospital.

>> So, when it comes to having a \'disease\' , I use think about the mood of that day in the hospital.
 I am grateful for living safely with my family so far.

>> I am grateful for living healthily with my family so far.