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2013-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Let me introduce myself. My Korea name is choi hyun-jung I am 24 years old. I work in a hospital. I have been working for three years. I graduated from the University in 2011. I was right on the job. My major is Radiology. I am [Name] Technologists Why study English, I will go abroad next year. I will travel or work. Has not yet been determined. I live in Seoul. ----- Summary dialogue Harry was born in South Korea. Jasmine was born in Los Angeles California. Harry lived in Canada for 15 years. Harry and Jasmine are having a vacation in Hawaii.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!! ^^I appreciate you doing your best with your homework for tonight. That was amazing. I get to know you better and it seems that you are a great person. Keep up the great job! Have a great evening ahead. Teacher Jane ^_^   Let me introduce myself.>> CORRECT!My Korea name is choi hyun-jung >> My Korean name is Choi, Hyun-jung. I am 24 years old. >> CORRECT!I work in a hospital.>> CORRECT!I have been working for three years. >> I have been working there for three years. I graduated from the University in 2011.>> CORRECT!I was right on the job.>> MAYBE YOU MEAN TO SAY: I am the perfect person for this job. My major is Radiology. >> CORRECT!I am [Name] Technologists>> I am a radiation technologists. Why study English,>> Why I am studying English? I will go abroad next year. >> CORRECT!I will travel or work. >> CORRECT!Has not yet been determined.>> But that I haven\'t determined that yet. I live in Seoul.>> CORRECT!-----Summary dialogue>> Dialogue summary: Harry was born in South Korea.>> CORRECT!Jasmine was born in Los Angeles California.>> CORRECT!Harry lived in Canada for 15 years.>> CORRECT!Harry and Jasmine are having a vacation in Hawaii. >> CORRECT!

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