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학생이 쓴 원문
Let me introduce myself.
My Korea name is choi hyun-jung
I am 24 years old.
I work in a hospital.
I have been working for three years.
I graduated from the University in 2011.
I was right on the job.
My major is Radiology.
I am [Name] Technologists
Why study English,
I will go abroad next year.
I will travel or work.
Has not yet been determined.
I live in Seoul.
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Summary dialogue
Harry was born in South Korea.
Jasmine was born in Los Angeles California.
Harry lived in Canada for 15 years.
Harry and Jasmine are having a vacation in Hawaii.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!! ^^I appreciate you doing your best with your homework for tonight.
That was amazing.
I get to know you better and it seems that you are a great person.
Keep up the great job!
Have a great evening ahead.
Teacher Jane ^_^
Let me introduce myself.>> CORRECT!My Korea name is choi hyun-jung
>> My Korean name is Choi, Hyun-jung. I am 24 years old.
>> CORRECT!I work in a hospital.>> CORRECT!I have been working for three years.
>> I have been working there for three years. I graduated from the University in 2011.>> CORRECT!I was right on the job.>> MAYBE YOU MEAN TO SAY: I am the perfect person for this job. My major is Radiology.
>> CORRECT!I am [Name] Technologists>> I am a radiation technologists. Why study English,>> Why I am studying English? I will go abroad next year.
>> CORRECT!I will travel or work.
>> CORRECT!Has not yet been determined.>> But that I haven\'t determined that yet. I live in Seoul.>> CORRECT!-----Summary dialogue>> Dialogue summary: Harry was born in South Korea.>> CORRECT!Jasmine was born in Los Angeles California.>> CORRECT!Harry lived in Canada for 15 years.>> CORRECT!Harry and Jasmine are having a vacation in Hawaii.
>> CORRECT!
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