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There are several situations to negotiate with other people.
It\'s important to have good negotiation skills if we want to gain best results from the negotiation.
I think it\'s not good to strongly insist on my benefits.
It\'s desirable to listen to other people\'s opinion carefully and I should know how to discard my minor interests for big advantages.
I also have chances to compromise something.
Simply when I go to traditional market to buy vegetables and fruits, I often negotiate on the product\'s price.
In case that our team should buy some products within a limited budget and all team members want to buy different items, then we make a decision which product is priority to buy.
강사 첨삭
Good day. Dr. [이름]!
In class today, we have emphasized the importance of negotiation skills to upscale our happiness and success. True to what you have mentioned below, it is sometimes giving up some tiny or irrrelevant things to give way to greater interests.
Anyway, the structure and meaning of this composition displays excellence in all aspects of grammar, ideas, logical results and discussion, as well as accurate examples. Congratulations for doing an outstanding job! I have deleted \'a\' twice in the last two sentences for the grammar suggestion.
See you again soon!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
It\'s important to have good negotiation skills if we want to gain best results from the negotiation.
It\'s important to have good negotiation skills if we want to gain best results from the negotiation.
>> Correct!
I think it\'s not good to strongly insist on my benefits.
>> Correct!
It\'s desirable to listen to other people\'s opinion carefully and I should know how to discard my minor interests for big advantages.
>> Correct!
I also have chances to compromise something.
>> Correct!
Simply when I go to traditional market to buy vegetables and fruits, I often negotiate on the product\'s price.
>> Simply when I go to the traditional market to buy vegetables and fruits, I often negotiate on the product\'s price.
In case that our team should buy some products within a limited budget and all team members want to buy different items, then we make a decision which product is priority to buy.
>> In case that our team should buy some products within a limited budget and all team members want to buy different items, then we make a decision which product is a priority to buy.
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