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2019-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Do you consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to still be beauty? Why/why not? <Answer> I consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) is not to still be beauty. Because I think everyone has their own beauty. But I think artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) harms it. So, I consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) is not to still be beauty.

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- Blair

I consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) is not to still be beauty.
Because I think everyone has their own beauty.
But I think artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) harms it.
So, I consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) is not to still be beauty.

I consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) to not be a beauty because I believe that artificial beauty harms natural beauty.

So, I consider artificial beauty (cosmetic surgery) is not to still be beauty.

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