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Hi [이름]! Hope you are having a great day! Thank you for catching up with this homework. Know that I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^ You gave a wonderful opinion on this one. It\'s not a matter of choice but a preference. A person chooses a job not for the salary alone. Maybe, for most it\'s a matter of preference and not choice. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I disagree with the suggested issue.

>>Correct
The salary is very important to get a job and live life, but, it is not most important thing to choice a job.

>>Salary is very important to live life well, but it is not the most important thing about a job.
For example, artist is a representative job to explain about this.

>>To elaborate more, let\'s take an artist being a representative job as an example. 
Surely some famous artist earn a lot of money.

>>Surely, some famous artists earn a lot of money. 
However, most artist earn small money and not rich.

>>However, most artists earn only a small amount of money and are not rich.
I saw the most happy job ranking a few years ago. 

>>I saw a job ranking list based on happiness level a few years ago.
First ranked job was artist.

>>The first one was artist.
It was amazing to me.

>>Correct 
Many high salary jobs were ranked highly, but salary was not exactly proportional to the happiness.

>>Correct 
If artist want to do art, they should earn money to buy paint or clay or sketchbook. 

>>If artists want to do art, they should have money to buy their paints, clay or sketchbooks.
But, maybe it is not their goal to choose their job.

>>Correct or

>>Maybe it\'s not their goal to be choosy about their jobs.