1.5 Homework

2015-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! If there's something you'd like to change about yourself,what would that be and why? Yes. there's something I would like to change about myself.The first thing is delaying something. I think that I have got to take a rule to be put into action immediately. Secondly I need to try to mind my language. small slip of the tongue can deeply hurt to others. I am a little busy now,because I have a visitor from India now.so I can't write conposition anymore.I don't have enough time. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even if you are busy. I really appreciate it. Anyway, have a good day! ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning!>> Correct.If there\'s something you\'d like to change about yourself,what would that be and why?Yes. there\'s something I would like to change about myself. >> Correct. The first thing is delaying something. >> Firstly, I need to stop procrastinating. I think that I have got to take a rule to be put into action immediately. >> I think that I ned to make a rule to do things immediately. Secondly I need to try to mind my language. >> Secondly, I need to mind my manner of speaking. small slip of the tongue can deeply hurt to others. >> A slip of the tongue can deeply hurt others. I am a little busy now, because I have a visitor from India now. >> I am a little busy now, because I have a visitor from India. so I can\'t write conposition anymore. >> So I cannot write a long composition. I don\'t have enough time. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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