1.5 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning!
If there's something you'd like to change about yourself,what would that be and why?
Yes. there's something I would like to change about myself.The first thing is delaying something. I think that I have got to take a rule to be put into action immediately. Secondly I need to try to mind my language. small slip of the tongue can deeply hurt to others. I am a little busy now,because I have a visitor from India now.so I can't write conposition anymore.I don't have enough time.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework even if you are busy. I really appreciate it. Anyway, have a good day!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning!>> Correct.If there\'s something you\'d like to change about yourself,what would that be and why?Yes. there\'s something I would like to change about myself.
>> Correct.
The first thing is delaying something.
>> Firstly, I need to stop procrastinating.
I think that I have got to take a rule to be put into action immediately.
>> I think that I ned to make a rule to do things immediately.
Secondly I need to try to mind my language.
>> Secondly, I need to mind my manner of speaking.
small slip of the tongue can deeply hurt to others.
>> A slip of the tongue can deeply hurt others.
I am a little busy now, because I have a visitor from India now.
>> I am a little busy now, because I have a visitor from India.
so I can\'t write conposition anymore.
>> So I cannot write a long composition.
I don\'t have enough time.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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