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2016-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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what is the most serious problem that the world has right now? ->I think IS terrorist organization is the most dangerous problem. Instructions: Choose the correct letter to complete the sentences. 1. Is that your notebook or __mine_________ (my/mine)? 2. I don't like __their_________ (their/theirs) apartment. 3. That's not my problem. It's __yours_________ (yours/your). 4. Your car is green, while __mine________ (my/mine) is black. 5. Isn't ___their_________ (their/theirs) son older than you?

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]!

Indeed, the IS is a big problem for everyone right now.

I still don\'t understand why they have to terrorize people for their cause.

Your country is lucky because you are safe from them.

Last year was really a bad time for everyone, especially those in Paris amd Syria.

But thankfully, Paris is trying to survive the attack.

Too bad, Syria is always a victim of the IS.

I hope the IS will really stop what they are doing soon.

Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts in today\'s homework.

Have a great day!

Teacher Anne

 

->I think IS terrorist organization is the most dangerous problem.
>> I think the IS terrorist organization is the most dangerous problem in the world.

1. Is that your notebook or __mine_________ (my/mine)?

>> Correct!
2. I don\'t like __their_________ (their/theirs) apartment.

>> Correct!
3. That\'s not my problem. It\'s __yours_________ (yours/your).

>> Correct!
4. Your car is green, while __mine________ (my/mine) is black.

>> Correct!
5. Isn\'t ___their_________ (their/theirs) son older than you?

>> Correct!
 

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