1. 5. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY WRITING:
Directions: Explain the this quote using complete sentences that is not more than 8.
Quote: "Better late than never."
When I was 12 years old, I had a friend who is very good at knitting. I tried to make beautiful muffler like hers but I can't. I always wondered why I can't make a muffler like her. 14 years later-Last year, I learned how to knit in our University. I got to know new stitch method which repeats a knit stitch and a purl stitch. When I used the new stitch method, my muffler was as beutiful as the friend's muffler which was made 14 years ago. Although I'm lateter than her, I was so pleased to do it. "Better late than never."
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When I was 12 years old, I had a friend who is very good at knitting.
>> Correct!
I tried to make beautiful muffler like hers but I can\'t.
>> Correct!
I always wondered why I can\'t make a muffler like her.
>> Correct!
14 years later-Last year, I learned how to knit in our University.
>> Last year, I learned how to knit in our university.
OR:>> After 14 years, I learned how to knit in our university.
I got to know new stitch method which repeats a knit stitch and a purl stitch.
>> I learned new stitching methods such as knit stitch and purl stitch.
When I used the new stitch method, my muffler was as beutiful as the friend\'s muffler which was made 14 years ago.
>> When I used the new stitch method in making my muffler, it looks beautiful as the muffler that was made by my friend 14 years ago.
Although I\'m lateter than her, I was so pleased to do it. \"Better late than never.\"
>> Although I learned stitching later than her, I am still please that I made it. For me, it is \'better late than never\'.
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