1.5 homework
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1. interior
2. presentable
3. impress
4. elegant
1. We didn\'t hope to move to a new house therefore we were looking for a change. In the end, we decided to redo interior inside of our house.
>> We didn\'t hope to move to a new house therefore, we were looking for a change. In the end, we decided to redo the interior of our house.
2. Look at the guy ! that guy is my brother who is a really presentable young man. I am always proud of him that\'s why he is on a fast track at work!
>> Look at that guy! That young man who looks very presentable is my brother. He\'s on the fast track at work that\'s why I am always proud of him.
3. He is always trying to impress me. This is a main reason why he always wears a smile and is fairly friendly.
>> He\'s always trying to impress me. This is the main reason why he always wears a smile and is fairly friendly.
4. I am in charge of recycling the trash at home.
>> or: I am in charge of recycling the rubbish at home.
One day, I went to a dump in order to throw away garbage at night. At that time, I saw a elegant sofa which has been took out. But i thought that one was still worth using.
>> There was a time when I went out at night to throw out the trash into a dumpster. At that time, I saw an elegant looking sofa that was thrown out but I thought it was still worth using.
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