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A long time ago, our forefathers couldn't think to travel oversea because when they want to travel, they spent to a lot of time. They couldn't know how to go fast oversea. Nowadays, many people can travel by an airplane. It makes to save our time and many people can see a lot of things in the world. However, these days I am afriad that many airplanes happen an accident.

Hello [이름] - I always wanted to hear your ideas about the things around us. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. I hope that you are having a great evening! Here are some corrections I made for you. Have fun and I\'ll talk to you again! ^^   = Teacher Bella =   A long time ago, our forefathers couldn\'t think to travel oversea because when they want to travel, they spent to a lot of time. >> In the past, our forefathers couldn\'t think of ways to travel overseas because when they do, they spend a lot of time. They couldn\'t know how to go fast oversea. >> They don\'t know how to travel overseas as fast as they can. Nowadays, many people can travel by an airplane. >> Nowadays, many people can travel using an airplane. It makes to save our time and many people can see a lot of things in the world. >> It saves our time and many people can see a lot of things in the world. However, these days I am afriad that many airplanes happen an accident. >> However, these days, I\'m afraid that many airline companies experience accidents.