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2015-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. I disagree. If students pay to learn to their teachers, maybe teachers can think that their students like money.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for your opinion about the topic. ^^ Just don\'t forget to introduce the topic in your first sentence so that your readers will know what you are talking about. Also, I am not sure what you mean in your second sentence and this is why examples are important. Examples should be given for further understanding. ^^   See you in class.   All good things, ==Teacher Bella==   I disagree. >> I disagree that teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. If students pay to learn to their teachers, maybe teachers can think that their students like money. >> I disagree with this idea because if teachers get paid according to what their students learn, students might start to think that teachers only teach for money. >> OR: I disagree with this idea because if student\'s pay their teachers by how much they learn, the teachers might think that students are in it for the money.

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