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I memorized in English about myself. However, I couldn't memorize another things. My English name is [이름] and I am 41 years old. I am originally from Busan and I was brought up in Busan. I moved to Pyeongtaek-city with my family when I was 10 years old. I am married and I have two daughters. Of course I have one husband. I am just kidding. I didn't get the chance to study in a University because my family was very poor. But it's okay. I like my job and I am a luck woman for having one. I want to work in my office for a long time. Also I want my family to be happy for the years to come.

    Hello [이름]!   I appreciate your effort to memorize your answers. Some reminders: 1. Follow the pattern Subject-Verb-Object. After that, you can put adverbial phrases. 2. A simple rule to help you remember the difference between another and other is: another + singular nounother + plural noun   Teacher Venus^^   I memorized in English about myself. >>>I memorized some details about myself in English. However, I couldn\'t memorize another things.>>>However, I couldn\'t memorize other things. My English name is [이름] and I am 41 years old. >>>CORRECT   I am originally from Busan and I was brought up in Busan. >>>CORRECT I moved to Pyeongtaek-city with my family when I was 10 years old.>>>CORRECT I am married and I have two daughters.>>>CORRECT   Of course I have one husband.>>>CORRECT   I am just kidding.>>>CORRECT   I didn\'t get the chance to study in a University because my family was very poor.>>>I didn\'t get the chance to study in a university because my family was very poor.   But it\'s okay.>>>CORRECT   I like my job and I am a luck woman for having one.>>>I like my job and I am a lucky woman for having one.   I want to work in my office for a long time. >>>CORRECT Also I want my family to be happy for the years to come. >>>CORRECT