1.6 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It's a nice Tuesday. Let's enjoy ourselves the first week of this year. Good luck!
Which places will take him to and which kinds of food will recommend for him?
If a visitor from another country will visit my hometown, I will take him to Haeundae beach. The scenery of there is famous for sunrise and its sea food such as sliced raw fish and roasted clam.I really want to recommend this tour course for him.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
It\'s a new year so let\'s enjoy every moment of it. Have a good day and take care always!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning! It\'s a nice Tuesday.
>> Correct.
Let\'s enjoy ourselves the first week of this year.
>> Let\'s enjoy the first week of this year.
Good luck!
>> Correct.Which places will take him to and which kinds of food will recommend for him?If a visitor from another country will visit my hometown, I will take him to Haeundae beach.
>> If a visitor from another country would visit my hometown, I will take him to Haeundae beach.
The scenery of there is famous for sunrise and its sea food such as sliced raw fish and roasted clam.
>> The sunrise is a famous scenery and sea food such as sliced raw fish and roasted clam.
I really want to recommend this tour course for him.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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