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학생이 쓴 원문
>>> Do you have any pets?
No, i don't have any pets.
>>> Do you like to cook?
Yes, l like to cook
>>> What's your favorite food?
My favorite food is chiken
>>> Do you have brothers and sisters? Are they older or younger than you?
Yes, I have younger sister
>>> How do you spend your free time?
I doing watch TV and read book when i free time
>>> Tell me about a favorite event of your childhood
When i was seven years old, I went KidZania with my friend
강사 첨삭
Hello there my princess [이름]! Nice meeting you! Hehehe! This homework really helped me to know you better! I am very proud that you are already improving in your sentence constructions! Keep up the good works! You can make it! I believe in you! I\'m gonna miss you.. I\'ll see you on Monday! Keep safe!
>>> Do you have any pets?No, i don\'t have any pets.
>>>CORRECT.>>> Do you like to cook?Yes, l like to cook>>> YOU CAN SAY: Yes, I do like cooking.
>>> What\'s your favorite food?My favorite food is chicken.>>> CORRECT.
OR: you can share what chicken dishes you like the most.
>>> Do you have brothers and sisters? Are they older or younger than you?Yes, I have younger sister>>> Yes, I have a younger sister. (Please do not forget the article \"a\")
>>> How do you spend your free time?I doing watch TV and read book when i free time
>>> I like watching TV and reading a book in my free time.>>> Tell me about a favorite event of your childhoodWhen i was seven years old, I went KidZania with my friend
>>> When i was seven years old, I went to KidZania with my friend.
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