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2016-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

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>>> Do you have any pets? No, i don't have any pets. >>> Do you like to cook? Yes, l like to cook >>> What's your favorite food? My favorite food is chiken >>> Do you have brothers and sisters? Are they older or younger than you? Yes, I have younger sister >>> How do you spend your free time? I doing watch TV and read book when i free time >>> Tell me about a favorite event of your childhood When i was seven years old, I went KidZania with my friend

강사 첨삭

Hello there my princess [이름]!  Nice meeting you! Hehehe!  This homework really helped me to know you better! I am very proud that you are already improving in your sentence constructions! Keep up the good works! You can make it! I believe in you!  I\'m gonna miss you.. I\'ll see you on Monday! Keep safe!   >>> Do you have any pets?No, i don\'t have any pets. >>>CORRECT.>>> Do you like to cook?Yes, l like to cook>>> YOU CAN SAY: Yes, I do like cooking. >>> What\'s your favorite food?My favorite food is chicken.>>> CORRECT. OR: you can share what chicken dishes you like the most. >>> Do you have brothers and sisters? Are they older or younger than you?Yes, I have younger sister>>> Yes, I have a younger sister. (Please do not forget the article \"a\") >>> How do you spend your free time?I doing watch TV and read book when i free time >>> I like watching TV and reading a book in my free time.>>> Tell me about a favorite event of your childhoodWhen i was seven years old, I went KidZania with my friend >>> When i was seven years old, I went to KidZania with my friend.

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