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2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I checked your message. Thank you very much about the kindness of you. I will study about some adjectives everyday. I really really thank you. You are very fascinating teacher. Thanks to you, I will study English very harder than now. sometimes my team leader asks about my private life. I like my team leader but I can't understand it. I don't want to talk about my private life and I don't want to know someone's private life. It is keeping to protect for them.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름],

You are welcome! Maybe, your team leader just wants to get closer to you. Anyway, be careful not to catch a cold. It\'s cold this week.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I checked your message.

>>correct!
Thank you very much about the kindness of you.

>>Thank you very much for your kindness.
I will study about some adjectives everyday.

>>I will study some adjectives everyday
I really, really thank you.

>>correct!
You are very fascinating teacher.

>>You are a very fascinating teacher.
Thanks to you, I will study English very harder than now.
>>Thanks to you, I will study English harder now.
sometimes my team leader asks about my private life.

>>Sometimes my team leader asks about my private life.
I like my team leader but I can\'t understand it.

>>correct!
I don\'t want to talk about my private life and I don\'t want to know someone\'s private life.

>>correct!
It is keeping to protect for them.

>> I want to keep it  a secret from them.

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