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2016-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

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What springs to mind when you hear the word "barbecue"? >>> I want to eat barbecue. How important are barbecues in your country? >>>It is not important in my country In what ways is eating indoors better than having a barbecue? >>> I can't understant this sentens. Where is the best place to have a barbecue? >>> Best place to have a barbecue is outside.

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[이름] ^^ Barbecues are delicious! I like it too! Please take note of some corrections below ^^ I\'ll see you again mischievous girl   What springs to mind when you hear the word \"barbecue\"?>>> I want to eat barbecue.>>> Correct! How important are barbecues in your country?>>>It is not important in my country >>> Correct! >>> OR: Barbecues are not important in our country.In what ways is eating indoors better than having a barbecue?>>> I can\'t understant this sentens.>>> Ah ^^ It is asking how important eating inside the house because barbecues are food that can be eaten outside your house. Where is the best place to have a barbecue?>>> Best place to have a barbecue is outside. >>> The best place to have a barbecuse would be outside the house.

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