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2019-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Tell about a time when you lied to your parents, boss, or teacher. Is lying necessary?] Yes, I think lying is necessary within the boundary of conscience. For example, we can say \"you looks very good\" or \"It\'s very nice wear\" to others. We call lip service. Sometimes, I couldn\'t agree with my parents or boss\'s opinion. But, if it is not important to do my work, I just agree to them. Specially, manner to the elder people is very important to Asia countries. Behavior contrary to the elder people is often regarded as a rude attitude. However, I think most important thing is it is not exact that the elder people is always right.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. You are very much appreciated! ^ ^ You did a very good thought on this one. We can say that lying is necessary when it comes to the following grounds: when it delays pain or suffering, when it prevents harm, and to ease through certain social situations. But of course, it\'s always nice to remain truthful at all times! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


Yes, I think lying is necessary within the boundary of conscience. 

>>Yes, I think lying is necessary as long as it\'s within the boundaries of our conscience.
For example, we can say \"you looks very good\" or \"It\'s very nice wear\" to others. 

>>For example, we can say; \"you look very nice!\" or \"it\'s a very nice outfit!\" to others.
We call lip service.

>>We call it lip service.
Sometimes, I couldn\'t agree with my parents or boss\'s opinion.

>>Correct or

>>Sometimes, I couldn\'t or don\'t agree with my parents or boss\'s opinion. 
But, if it is not important to do my work, I just agree to them. 

>>But, if it doesn\'t affect my work, I just agree with them. 
Specially, manner to the elder people is very important to Asia countries. 

>>Especially showing good manners to elderly people is very important for Asians.
Behavior contrary to the elder people is often regarded as a rude attitude. 

>>A behavior that is not acceptable for elderly people is often regarded as rude.
However, I think most important thing is it is not exact that the elder people is always right.

>>However, just because they are older or elderly people doesn\'t mean that they are always right. 


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