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While I sleep in my dream, I want to meet a very handsome man and I want to marry with him.
However, it is not easy also it is not in real life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Dreams could either make you happy, puzzled or sad. I wish we could just dream of happy times though. What about you?
Take care!
~T. Lynn
While I sleep in my dream, I want to meet a very handsome man and I want to marry with him.
>> While I sleep, I dreamed of meeting a very handsome mand and I want to marry him.
However, it is not easy also it is not in real life.
>> However that is not easy and it\'s not real.
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