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학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think people can control their own destinies?
I think it is very difficult but I am trying for my future.
I also think all people in the world are living in uncertain future.
So we have to try and try if you don't do something for your future, I suggest that you just try something right now.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Wow! perfect sentences! Congratulations!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Do you think people can control their own destinies?
>> correct!
I think it is very difficult but I am trying for my future.
>> correct!
I also think all people in the world are living in uncertain future.
>> correct!
So we have to try and try if you don\'t do something for your future, I suggest that you just try something right now.
>> correct!
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