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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I think water shortage is a worldwide problem. Many people don\'t care about the environment. Of course, it causes us problem like water shortage, air pollution and others. You are a good mom since you are educating your children about the importance of saving electricity and water. Good job!(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I am trying to teach saving energy, electricity, water etc.
>> I am teaching my children how to save energy, electricity, water etc.
OR>> I always tell my children to save energy, electricity, water and others.
These days espeacily many children don\'t care about water.
>> These days many children don\'t care about water.
In my country water don\'t have ehough.
>> In my country, we don\'t have enough water.
So I often say to my children you have to save water for our future.
>> correct!
We also have to care about electricity, espeacily in summer.
>> correct!
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