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Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Maybe your coworkers aren\'t so busy as you so they have time to play smartphone games.(\",) Actually, these games are addicting too.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
My office have been bening their employees from using social networking sites at work.
>> My office have been banning the employees from using social networking sites at work.
Because they think that most employees don\'t work in working hours because of it.
>> correct!
I can understand.
>> correct!
If I am a boss, I will do it.
>> If I am the boss, I will do that too.
However many employees play online games in working hours with their smartphone.
>> However, many employees play online games during working hours with their smartphones.
I can\'t understand.
>> I can\'t understand them.
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