1
학생이 쓴 원문
I disagree.
Maybe my daughter has to take care of her husband.
I hope my daughter is protected by her husband and receive his love.
But younger man who is my daughter's husband can be friends and young brother together.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
I hope your daughters will meet good husbands who\'ll shower them with love and devotion. Let\'s pray for that.(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I disagree.
>> correct!
Maybe my daughter has to take care of her husband.
>> correct!
I hope my daughter is protected by her husband and receive his love.
>> I hope my daughter will be protected by her husband and she\'ll receive a lot of love from him.
But younger man who is my daughter\'s husband can be friends and young brother together.
>> But a younger man as a husband can be a friend to my daughter.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.