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I didn't think before but if I could go to travel in space I want to go to Mars.
Because maybe Mars is similar to Earth.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Have you watched the movie \"The Martian\"? Scientists have been saying people could possibly live in planet Mars in the future. Let\'s go together.(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I didn\'t think before but if I could go to travel in space I want to go to Mars.
>> I haven\'t thought about that before but if I could travel in space, I want to go to Mars.
Because maybe Mars is similar to Earth.
>> correct!
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