1.8 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
I am looking forward to the weekend at this time of the week.
Can smart-phone users protect themselves from malicious applications that can be downloaded from different sources?
Yes. I know that smart-phone users can protect themselves from malicious applications with vaccine programs.We often use V3 vaccine program for the protection in Korea.I have an experence that I felt very hard by the malicious application.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition. It is nice that there already downloadble programs to protect people from malicious applications. Anyway, let\'s look forward to a wonderful and fun weekend. Take care and see you tomorrow.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.I am looking forward to the weekend at this time of the week.>> Correct.Can smart-phone users protect themselves from malicious applications that can be downloaded from different sources?Yes. I know that smart-phone users can protect themselves from malicious applications with vaccine programs.
>> Correct.We often use V3 vaccine program for the protection in Korea.
>> We often use V3 vaccine program for our protection in Korea.
I have an experence that I felt very hard by the malicious application.>> I had a difficult and bad experience because of a malicious application.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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