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2015-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! I am looking forward to the weekend at this time of the week. Can smart-phone users protect themselves from malicious applications that can be downloaded from different sources? Yes. I know that smart-phone users can protect themselves from malicious applications with vaccine programs.We often use V3 vaccine program for the protection in Korea.I have an experence that I felt very hard by the malicious application. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your composition. It is nice that there already downloadble programs to protect people from malicious applications. Anyway, let\'s look forward to a wonderful and fun weekend. Take care and see you tomorrow.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.I am looking forward to the weekend at this time of the week.>> Correct.Can smart-phone users protect themselves from malicious applications that can be downloaded from different sources?Yes. I know that smart-phone users can protect themselves from malicious applications with vaccine programs. >> Correct.We often use V3 vaccine program for the protection in Korea. >> We often use V3 vaccine program for our protection in Korea. I have an experence that I felt very hard by the malicious application.>> I had a difficult and bad experience because of a malicious application.Thank you! >> Correct.

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