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2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I have a rich array of presents waiting for you that’s why i am a Santa Claus. I put the present waiting for you at night when you go to bed. 2. I always hope to have leisure time. Because i am working on the weekdays therefore i need a few spare time. On the weekends i am going to cook for myself. I learned how to make fried rice from FOOD BLOG. It may tastes like dirt but it will be better than going bed hungry. 3. A big event was held on the road so that traffic was terribly congested in this steet. 4. Now, traffic is heavy because of a big event. It will benefit to arrive early. 5. We planned on having a barbeque on terrace on the weekends. This was a last chance to go outside that’s why it stated to get cold. But, suddenly it started to pour ! I mean pour ! So we were crushed at that time. You know, the only drawback was to be really bad luck.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.

 


Cheers!
Jean 



1. I have a rich array of presents waiting for you that’s why i am a Santa Claus.
I put the present waiting for you at night when you go to bed.
>> Since I am [Name] Claus, I have a rich array of present waiting for you.

Your present is waiting for you under the Christmas tree where I left it while you were sleeping.


 2. I always hope to have leisure time. Because i am working on the weekdays therefore i need a few spare time.
On the weekends i am going to cook for myself. I learned how to make fried rice from FOOD BLOG. It may tastes like dirt but it will be better than going bed hungry.
>> I always hope to have leisure time because I\'m working on the weekdays therefore, I need a little spare time. 

I am going to cook for myself on the weekend. I learned how to make friend rice from FOOD BLOG. It may tastes like dirt but it will be better than going to bed hungry.

 3. A big event was held on the road so that traffic was terribly congested in this steet.
>> A big event was held on the road, which caused traffic congestions.


 4. Now, traffic is heavy because of a big event. It will benefit to arrive early.
>> Traffic is heavy at the moment because of a big event. It\'s better to arrive early.


 5. We planned on having a barbeque on terrace on the weekends.
>> We planned on having a barbeque on the terrace on the weekend.
 

This was a last chance to go outside that’s why it stated to get cold.
>> This is our last chance to go outside before it starts to get cold.


But, suddenly it started to pour ! 

>> But, suddenly it started to pour! 


 I mean pour !

>>  I mean pour!


 So we were crushed at that time. You know, the only drawback was to be really bad luck.

>> So we were crushed at that time. It seems to me that we were unlucky.


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