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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Everyone! First of all I would like to say, Thank you for giving me the chance to introduce myself to you.
I am glad to be here today. My name is [Name] HWANG
I am a senior student at Hankyung university and my major is Horticulture.
The reason I came here is that I would like to help you as your senior for sharing my tips to you.
In fact, Through this chance I might also get confidence.
I have a question first, Do you have a dream? or Are you satisfied with your current major?
강사 첨삭
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Hello Everyone! First of all I would like to say, Thank you for giving me the chance to introduce myself to you.>>Correct!I am glad to be here today.
>>Correct!
My name is [Name] HWANG>>Correct!
>>Punctuation mark: period [.] after the sentence.I am a senior student at Hankyung university and my major is Horticulture.>>Correct!The reason I came here is that I would like to help you as your senior for sharing my tips to you.>>Correct!In fact, Through this chance I might also get confidence.>>Correct!I have a question first, Do you have a dream? or Are you satisfied with your current major?
>>Before we start, I have a question, Do you have a dream? Or Are you satisfied with your currect major?
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