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2011-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Vaness

학생이 쓴 원문

Even if you don’t have a dream right now, do not be disappointed and frustrated. I really understand what's you are feeling and situation, because I felt the same when I was younger. But I could find a dream through many experiences and now because of my dream I am happy day by day. My life's motto is “Every single experience will make me a better person’ so whenever I feel difficulty or have a hard time, I used to say to myself “This experience will help me a lot later, so try my luck”, I think I have overcome since I kept saying my motto.

강사 첨삭

Good job.^^   Even if you don't have a dream right now, do not be disappointed and frustrated. >> CORRECT I really understand what\'s you are feeling and situation, because I felt the same when I was younger. >> I really understand what\'s you are feeling and your situation, because I felt the same when I was younger. >> I really understand what\'s you are feeling and what you are going through, because I felt the same when I was younger. But I could find a dream through many experiences and now because of my dream I am happy day by day. >> CORRECT My life\'s motto is \'Every single experience will make me a better person, so whenever I feel difficulty or have a hard time, I used to say to myself\' This experience will help me a lot later, so try my luck\' I think I have overcome since I kept saying my motto. >> My life\'s motto is \'Every single experience will make me a better person\', so whenever I feel difficulty or have a hard time, I used to say to myself, \'This experience will help me a lot later, so try my luck\', I think I have overcome many things since I kept saying my motto.

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