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If I could go to back in the past, I want to change my mistakes but I can\'t do it.
So I hope that my children don\'t make the mistake like me.
However they don\'t know time can\'t reback.
강사 첨삭
If I could go to back in the past, I want to change my mistakes but I can\'t do it.
>> If I could go back in the past, I would want to change my mistakes but I can\'t.
So I hope that my children don\'t make the mistake like me.
>> So, I hope that my children won\'t make the same mistakes I did.
However they don\'t know time can\'t reback.
>> However, they don\'t know that time can\'t be taken back.
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>>> However, they don\'t know that we can\'t take back time.
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