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2019-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I’ve been to barcelona during my vacation. I staied there 4 months. It was great experience to me. I often visited the beach which is called barceloneta. I loved the sunshine there. It took only 20 minutes by waking from home to the beach.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Ms. [Name] [이름]^^

I appreciate your time and effort doing your homework today.

Now that you are telling about Barcelona, I also want to visit this place someday.

QUESTION: What is the nicest place you\'ve stayed at while on vacation? Please explain your answer.

I’ve been to barcelona during my vacation.

>>I went to Barcelona during the vacation.

I staied there 4 months.

>>I stayed there for four months.

It was great experience to me.

>>It was a great experience to me.

I often visited the beach which is called barceloneta.

>>I often visited a beach called Baseloneta.

I loved the sunshine there.

>>I love the sunshine there.

It took only 20 minutes by waking from home to the beach.

>>It only takes 20 minutes by walk from my house to the beach.

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