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2015-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good afternoon! It's a nice day to go out somewhere and burning Friday. What do you have some special plans on weekend. I hope that you will have a fruitful weekend. What are the specific forms of gambling that are regulated and legalized in your country? I know that there are two types of gamblings in Korea. The one is regulated gambling such as card playing individually at an undisclosed location. Another one is legalized gambling such as lottery and investment in stocks. but I don't like gamblings basically. Thank you! Have a nice weekend!

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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Anywya, enjoy your weekend and happy burning Friday! Take care!~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good afternoon! >> Correct. It\'s a nice day to go out somewhere and burning Friday. >> It\'s a nice day to go out somewhere and have a burning Friday.What do you have some special plans on weekend. >> Do you have some special plans on the weekend? I hope that you will have a fruitful weekend. >> Correct.What are the specific forms of gambling that are regulated and legalized in your country?I know that there are two types of gamblings in Korea. >> I know that there are two types of gambling in Korea.  The one is regulated gambling such as card playing individually at an undisclosed location. >> One form of gambling is card playing at an undisclosed location. Another one is legalized gambling such as lottery and investment in stocks. >> Correct.but I don\'t like gamblings basically. >> But I don\'t like gambling basically.Thank you! Have a nice weekend! >> Correct.

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