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1. I need to maximize my capability at work because l would like to get promotion.
>> I need to maximize my capability at work because I aim to get promoted.

 2. It is significant that everything need a harmony of merit and drawback. For example, watching a lot of TV is harmful to children but you should allow children to watch educational TV.
>> It is significant that most things need harmony, that one should consider the merit and drawback. For instance, watching TV often is harmful to children but they should be allowed to watch educational TV programs.

 3. There were so many heavy traffic in this road because of big event held in stadium.
>> There was a heavy traffic jam due to a big event held at a stadium.

 4. I have hectic schedule on work every weekdays so that i extremely eager to come my upcoming holiday.
>> I have a hectic schedule at work on the weekdays that\'s why I\'m eagerly waiting for upcoming holiday.

 5. In my area, a new strip mall is built. Thus it has collection of various restaurants and shops. To wrap up, you can save time and money. It means that you can use time more productive.

>> A new strip mall is built in my area, which has a wide array of restaurants and shops. Thus, you can save time and money. It means that you can use your time more productively.