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학생이 쓴 원문
I have a good patience when i’m with a unkind person.
2. I want to foster good vibe in this class.
3. We would have a sincere mind with our precious people.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework! ^^
You did well. There were only minor corrections.
Keep it up. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I have good patience when I\'m with an unkind person.
>> Or: I\'m patient when I\'m with a rude person.
2. I want to foster good vibe in this class.
2. I want to foster good vibe in this class.
>> I want to foster good vibes in this class.
3. We would have a sincere mind with our precious people.
3. We would have a sincere mind with our precious people.
>> CORRECT.
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