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2020-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

When i was playing the jiu-jitsu, Back than i passed out. 2. Usually i have a throbbing teeth, When i go to bed without don’t brush my teeth. 3. He seem that he wants to go to home.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your homework. ^^
See you later in class.

~Teacher Gina


1. When i was playing the jiu-jitsu, Back than i passed out.
>> I passed out when I was playing jiu-jitsu back then.
2. Usually i have a throbbing teeth, When i go to bed without don’t brush my teeth.
>> I usually have a throbbing teeth when I go to bed without brushing my teeth.
3. He seem that he wants to go to home.
>> He seems that he wants to go home.

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