1. Best place in my country 2. Special food
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Where is the best place in your country to spend winter/spring/summer/fall? First in winter, we can go to ski resort. And in spring, we can go to park. In summer, we can go to swimming pool. Finally in fall, we can go to mountain.
2. Does your country have some special food for any of the seasons? In summer, we can eat watermelon. And in winter, we can eat rice cake soup.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
That sounds like a fantastic plan! Skiing in winter, enjoying the park in spring, hitting the swimming pool in summer, and exploring the mountains in fall seem like it\'s a well-rounded year. And I guess summer won\'t be complete without watermelons. I want to try the rice cake soup though. Anyhow, good job on your homework. Thanks for doing your best!
~ Teacher Maxine ^^
>> First, in winter, we can go to a ski resort.
And in spring, we can go to park.
>> And in spring, we can go to the park.
In summer, we can go to swimming pool.
>> In summer, we can go to the swimming pool.
Finally in fall, we can go to mountain.
>> Finally, in the fall, we can go to the mountains.
In summer, we can eat watermelon.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> During the summer, we have the delightful opportunity to enjoy watermelon.
And in winter, we can eat rice cake soup.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> And during the winter, we can savor rice cake soup.
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