1.Do you agree with these changes in road signs (FROM KOREAN TO ENGLISH)?why or wht not?2. what othe

2012-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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If I suggest something to boost tourism in korea, Of course I will introduce about korea culture. But that is too basis. If I introduce something special, I will do to foreigners can be feeling about a korean's special emotion. One of the korean people's special emotion is a strong spirit of unity. A korean people had strong spirit of unity. So a korean people use an unitive language. For example 'our country', 'out home', 'our shool' etc. And if big event is becoming, all people participate the event. For example when world cup event was opened, all korean people changed to red devil and they are all done like a one. But the west people use not an language like 'our country', 'out home', 'our shool' and also they just take pleasure themselves when a big event is becoming. Like this, If I should suggest something to boost tourism in korea, I would develop a foreigner can be feeled about a korean's emotion.

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HAPPY FRIDAY, Vincent! I hope you\'re having a good day today. I already made your corrections below so please check it out. May you have a spectacular weekend. Take care! If I suggest something to boost tourism in korea, Of course I will introduce about korea culture. But that is too basis. >>If I can suggest something to boost tourism in Korea, of course I will introduce Korea\'s culture, but that is too basic.If I introduce something special, I will do to foreigners can be feeling about a korean\'s special emotion.. >>If I introduce something special to foreigners, I want them to have a special impression about Koreans. (Is this what you mean?)One of the korean people\'s special emotion is a strong spirit of unity. >>Koreans are known for their strong spirit of unity.A korean people had strong spirit of unity. >>Koreans  have a strong spirit of unity. So a korean people use an unitive language. >>So koreans use a unified language. For example \'our country\', \'out home\', \'our shool\' etc. >>For example, \'our country\', \'our home\', \'our school\', etc.And if big event is becoming, all people participate the event. >>>If a big event is coming, everybody participates in the event. For example when world cup event was opened, all korean people changed to red devil and they are all done like a one. >>For example, when the world cup event was opened, all Koreans supported the red devils as one.But the west people use not an language like \'our country\', \'out home\', \'our shool\' and also they just take pleasure themselves when a big event is becoming. >>The western people do not use any language, like \'our country\', \'our home\', \'our school\', and also they also take pleasure when a big event is coming. Like this, If I should suggest something to boost tourism in korea, I would develop a foreigner can be feeled about a korean\'s emotion. >>Like if I could suggest something to boost tourism in Korea, I would let the foreigners relate to the Korean emotion.

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