1. Do you have any ideas on how to minimize the use of plastic?
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Using a lot of plastic is very big problem because it is occurred environment pollution.
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>>Plastic usage is a massive problem which is an occurred environment pollution.
So we have to reduce the use of plastic but it is difficult.
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>>Thus, we should lessen the use of plastic though it\'s hard.
Because we already adapt the convenience of plastic.
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>>Because we are used to it.
Thus, we should adapt the inconvenience of not using the plastic for environment protection.
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First, we use a tumbler instead of plastic cup(disposable cup).
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Last year, we start to ban the use of disposable cup at cafe.
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It is very inconvenient but now we adapt that naturally.
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>>It\'s convenient but we adapted it naturally.
Also, cafe discount to customer using a tumbler.
>>Also, cafes give discount to customer using a tumbler.
It affect to minimize the use of plastic.
>>It helps to minimize the usage of plastic.
Do you often use the wet tissue?
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>>Do you often use wet tissue?
It is included the plastic.
>>It is included as plastic.
>>It is considered as plastic.
I think that we are better to use handkerchief instead of wet tissue for environment.
>>I think we better use handkerchief instead of wet tissue for the environment.
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