1. Do you like used cars or new ones? Why?2. What is your dream car? Why do you like it?

1.I like new car rather than used car. If I buy a new car, I will think that the car's host is me. And I will give a feeling to the car and I will prize to the car. But for the new car I wouldn't give a feeling to the used car and I wouldn't prize the used car. This is not only the used car but an other things too. 2. My dream car is not fixed. As the time is hoing my preference is changing too. when I was teenager I dreamed the car, Sonata. But when I was 20 years old, I dreamed the car Genesis cupe. Because not only the car's design is very good but also the car's power is very strong. But someday my present dream car must will be changed. So my dream car is not fixed.

Hello there [이름]! ^^, How are you doing?I checked your two short paragraphs and they were very good! :) I must tell you, you have a very good ideas. Please do read the corrections I\'ve made. I am really thankful you found time to do your homework. Great work! :) You always take care and see you in class! :) T. Ritchel Here are some of my corrections for you: 1.I like new car rather than used car. >>I like a new car rather than a used car.If I buy a new car, I will think that the car\'s host is me. >>If I will buy a new car, I think that the driver will be me.And I will give a feeling to the car and I will prize to the car.>>I will took good care of the car. But for the new car I wouldn\'t give a feeling to the used car and I wouldn\'t prize the used car. >>But I will love more the new care compared to the used one. This is not only the used car but an other things too. >>This does not only apply to the used car but also to other things too. 2. My dream car is not fixed. >>I don\'t have a particular dream car. As the time is hoing my preference is changing too. >>As the time goes by, my idea of  a dream car is also changing. when I was teenager I dreamed the car, Sonata. >>When I was a teenager, my dream car is Sonata.But when I was 20 years old, I dreamed the car Genesis cupe. >>But when I was already 20 years old, my dream car is Genesis cupe.Because not only the car\'s design is very good but also the car\'s power is very strong. >>It is because not only the car\'s design is very good but also the car\'s power is very strong. But someday my present dream car must will be changed.>>But someday, my present dream car will be changed. So my dream car is not fixed. >>So, I don\'t have a fixed dream car.