1. Do you think it's possible to make friendships

2011-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1. Do you think it's possible to make friendships with the opposite sex? -.It is diffrent in diffrent situations. It differs in diffrent situations. As for me, I only have one female friend. Keeping friendship with her was sometimes hard. One day, she confessed her love for me by having a drink But I refused coz I couldn't feel attraction from her as lover. Another day, we went to motel together coz we were drunken so much. But we did nothing. In conclusion, Being a friend with the opposite sex is possible but it may be hard.

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Hi there my dear [이름],
Its always my pleasure reading your compositions..:)
I really love your stories most specially when you entrust me your private and personal things, it makes me feel very close to you..^^
Anyway, I'll talk to you later my dear..
T.Cam
 
1. Do you think it's possible to make friendships with the opposite sex?
>>Do you think it's possible to make friends with the opposite sex?
-.It is diffrent in diffrent situations.
>>Its different in may ways.
It differs in diffrent situations.
>>Its a case to case basis.
As for me, I only have one female friend.
>>correct!
Keeping friendship with her was sometimes hard.
>>correct!
One day, she confessed her love for me by having a drink
>>correct!
But I refused coz I couldn't feel attraction from her as lover.
>>But I refused because I couldnt feel any attraction to her.
Another day, we went to motel together
>>There was a time when we went to the motel together.
coz we were drunken so much. But we did nothing. 
>>Coz we were both drunk. but we did nothing.
In conclusion, Being a friend with the opposite sex is possible but it may be hard.
>>correct!

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