1, Do you use a aredit card? If you have you ever thought that your account would be hacked? why or

2012-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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If my accout is hacked by somebody, first of all I will report to bank So I will restrict to my celphone. And if somebody is using my account, I will report to police. After the occurence was soluted, I will change the password to new that other account and I was joined site. If I exeprience the occurence on time. I will very careful to join a site or settlement of account.

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Hello there, Vincent! I think that\'s a very good idea. You really have to report this incident to the authorities right away. Since you have a credit card, you have to be extra careful with that, especially when you\'re outside or when you\'re traveling. Have a nice day! Take care! If my accout is hacked by somebody, first of all I will report to bank >>If my account was hacked by somebody, I will report it to the bank immediately.So I will restrict to my celphone. >>I will also restrict my cellphone.And if somebody is using my account, I will report to police. >>If somebody is using my account, I will report it to the police.After the occurence was soluted, I will change the password to new that other account and I was joined site. >>If the incident is solved, I will change my password and I will join a site.If I exeprience the occurence on time. >>If I experience this on time,I will very careful to join a site or settlement of account. >>I will be very careful in joining a site or opening an account.          

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