1. Do you use a credit card? If yes, have you ever thought that your account would be hacked? Why or

I haven't yet bought a conterfeit luxury goods. I has bought a cheep products or has given more money to buy an luxury goods. But that is a situation that I have no money. Working in my office, I'm gathering some money. At first I thought that I will save 50% money of salary and I will use other money. But a month later, when a month salary was put in my account my mind was changed, I look for expensive and famous goods. Supposedly gathering a more money my greed is bigger than before. Nowadays I was had interest to luxury goods but not before. So I was being had conscious to brand. and increased to be proud of my luxury goods to others.

Hi there! Thank you so much for your composition today! You made an amazing answer. Good job! I enjoyed reading your sentences. I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good start! I placed corrections and the explanation for each mistakes. Please try to review them for your improvement. By constant pratice and perseverance, I know you\'ll be at par with native English speakers. We can do it! We are almost there! Catch you later :) ~T. Ritchel Here are my corrections for you: I haven\'t yet bought a conterfeit luxury goods. >> I haven\'t bought a conterfeit luxury goods yet.I has bought a cheep products or has given more money to buy an luxury goods. >> DID YOU MEAN: I bought cheap products or had not been given much money to buy luxury goods. (Please take note on the sentence structuring)But that is a situation that I have no money.>> During that time, I don\'t have enough moneyWorking in my office, I\'m gathering some money.>> While working in my office, I\'m also saving some money. (Please take note on the sentence structuring)At first I thought that I will save 50% money of salary and I will use other money.>> At first, I thought I will save 50% of money from my salary and I will use my savings. But a month later, when a month salary was put in my account my mind was changed,>> But a month later, right after depositing my monthly salary in my bank account, i suddenly change my mind. I look for expensive and famous goods.>> CorrectSupposedly gathering a more money my greed is bigger than before.>> DID YOU MEAN: Suddenly saving much money makes you greedy than before. (Please take note on the sentence structuring) Nowadays I was had interest to luxury goods but not before.>> Nowadays, I had been more interested with luxurious goods than before. So I was being had conscious to brand. and increased to be proud of my luxury goods to others. >> So, I became more conscious with the brand and made me feel so proud in affording luxurious goods.