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2019-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What do you complain about when you are bored? For you, what are some best ways to stop being bored? = I usually complain about why I have nothing to do when I am bored. Basically, If I had a hobby ike games, reading, or any kind of sports, I would be able to use my time more valuably instaed of spending time complaining. In my opinion, one of the best ways to stop being bored is finding what you like and do. Recently, I went jogging for the first time after I finished military service. It was challenging because I had not run quite for a long time and my thighs were crying for pain. However, the feelings I had after running was fantastic and revitalizing. This mood also leads me to be more productive and motivate me to find exciting thnigs to enjoy.

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~~May~~

I usually complain about why I have nothing to do when I am bored.

Basically, If I had a hobby ike games, reading, or any kind of sports, I would be able to use my time more valuably instaed of spending time complaining.
>> Check your spelling of \"instead\".

>> Grammar is correct. ^^
In my opinion, one of the best ways to stop being bored is finding what you like and do.

Recently, I went jogging for the first time after I finished military service.

It was challenging because I had not run quite for a long time and my thighs were crying for pain.

>> Grammar is correct in these sentences. ^^

However, the feelings I had after running was fantastic and revitalizing.

>> However, the feeling I had after running was fantastic and revitalizing.

>> feeling - was

This mood also leads me to be more productive and motivate me to find exciting thnigs to enjoy.

>> This mood also leads me to be more productive and motivates me to find exciting things to enjoy.

>> leads - motivates (parallelism)

>> Check your spelling of \"things\".

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