1. How often do you use the internet?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How often do you use the internet?
I like to use the internet on a daily basic when I have some free time.
because there are lots of wife zone and I can use it whenever I go.
and also I am able to easy fast to get some information on the internet
so I usually use study English on internet online in the evening
so I some times watch a video on Youtube because I want to kill some time while using the internet when I am staying at home.
especially these days It is difficult to for a sleep at night so I try to do something using the internet.
2. How can the internet help you learn English
I usually take English class internet online three times a week.
The websit named is Skype
I am able to hear and speak each other and writing. It is not difficult how to access online.
First I have to make an account
Second I send you my an account after that I am able to connect with teacher.
after that I am able to take class with my teacher. I some time study English through the YouTube.
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Good afternoon Julia!
Well done on writing your script but I gave some tiny corrections on your sentences. Please practice them and I hope that you would be able to say your script even without a copy!
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T. Aki~
1. How often do you use the internet?
I like to use the internet on a daily basic when I have some free time.
>>> I like to use the internet on a daily basis when I have some free time
because there are lots of wife zone and I can use it whenever I go.
>>> Because there are lots of WiFi zone and I can use it wherever I go.
and also I am able to easy fast to get some information on the internet
>>> Also, I am able to easily get fast information on the internet.
so I usually use study English on internet online in the evening
>>> So I usually use the internet when I study English online in the evening.
so I some times watch a video on Youtube because I want to kill some time while using the internet when I am staying at home.
>>> I sometimes use the internet to watch a video on Youtube to kilI some time when I am staying home.
especially these days It is difficult to for a sleep at night so I try to do something using the internet.
>>> Especially these days It is difficult for me to sleep at night so I try to do something using the internet.
2. How can the internet help you learn English
I usually take English class internet online three times a week.
>>> I usually take online English class three times a week.
The website named is Skype
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I use Skype as a platform in studying English.
I am able to hear and speak each other and writing. It is not difficult how to access online.
>>> My teacher and I can hear and talk to each other, and we can both write on the chat box. It is not difficult to access online.
First I have to make an account
>>> CORRECT!
Second I send you my an account after that I am able to connect with teacher.
>>> Second, I send my account then I am able to connect with my teacher.
after that I am able to take class with my teacher.
>>> After that, I am able to take a class with my teacher.
I some time study English through the YouTube
>>> I sometimes study English through YouTube.
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