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2013-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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I'm J.C I work for the lafirm a1 as a laywer. I usally operated civil, criminal, familiy cases and consuled about law problems for my korean clients. But I operating a civil action about develop of aboard properties for a foreigner client from two weeks ago. when I met her, I'm very nervous. because the fist foreigner client in my work life. I should talk to her in English so I determine to study English. when i come back home, i'm very tired but happy. because of my honey. I lived in seoul with my husband but we don't have baby not yet. we got married in last january. My husband was an architector but now an funiture designer. i like his funiture.

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Hi there once again Lawyer JC! Thank you so much for sending in your self-introduction. Actually, I thought you work for L\'Oreal. kkk. I listened to our call once again and I found out that you are a lawyer. Therefore, your self-introduction is really a big help for me to know you better. Thank you so much for that. I really aprreciate it. Anyway, I really enjoyed our class today eventhough it\'s our first class. I like the way you participate in the discussion. I hope we\'ll have lots of this. See you again tomorrow. Have a great day! ~T.Juliet^^   I\'m J.C >>CorrectI work for the lafirm a1 as a laywer. >>I work for  A1, a lawfirm, as a lawyer.I usally operated civil, criminal, familiy cases and consuled about law problems for my korean clients. >>I usually practice civil, criminal, and family cases not to mention cases of my Korean clients having legal problems.But I operating a civil action about develop of aboard properties for a foreigner client from two weeks ago. >>Since two weeks ago, I have started handling a case of a foreigner client regarding her properties abroad.when I met her, I\'m very nervous. because the fist foreigner client in my work life. >>When I met her, I was very nervous because she is my first foreigner client.I should talk to her in English so I determine to study English. >>I should talk to her in English so I decided to study this language.when i come back home, i\'m very tired but happy. because of my honey. >>When I come back home, I\'m very tired but happy because of my honey.I lived in seoul with my husband but we don\'t have baby not yet. we got married in last january. >>I live in Seoul with my husband and we don\'t have a baby yet. We got married last January.My husband was an architector but now an funiture designer. >>My husband was an architect but now, a furniture designer.  i  like his funiture. >>Correct >>OR: I like his designs.

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